my name is Matt Carpenter and im 20 years old...im from Waterloo,Iowa...but right now im living in Orange City,im writing for the bleacher report mainly because i love sports...it seems that sports are my life.im constantly playing or watching some kind of sports.
Hey Matt—Max Tcheyan here, a Bleacher Report Community Coordinator.
I've been spending time on our MLB page and read a couple of your old articles. Really on-point analysis...you do good work.
Given that you haven't written in a while, I thought I'd check in and see if you're interested in picking up your coverage again. What do you say?
If not, it would be great if you could give me some feedback on why you decided to stop writing and what we could have done to better serve you. If you wouldn't mind, please shoot me a line at email@example.com with any thoughts.
Thanks so much,
For all you Jag fans..
Matt, I'm not working in firefox today so here's some editor's feedback.
I tweaked your headline and teaser, separated your paragraphs, and corrected minor errors. Make sure everything checks out to your liking—keep up the great work!