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Hey, I'm Phil and I'm a 21 year old senior Journalism/Mass Communications major at St. Bonaventure University. I love most sports and love writing about sports. I have completed Editing and Writing internships here at the B/R and have moved on to be a Featured Columnist for the New York Giants and Knicks
Hi Phil could you please edit my latest story:
HI Philip, could you please edit my latest article....
Thanks for the edits, these I will remember and use :)
Thanks for the edit and feedback.
Cancel the request immediately below. I got an edit just as soon as I hit the "post" button. Thanks anyway.
Are yo available for an edit?
Thanks for the feedback Philip
Thanks for the feedback/edits and kind words too. I left all the changes you made except for taking the second "the" out of the title.
thx for the edit/feedback